Mid asf??

itsyaoighorl March 1, 2025 6:00 pm

Mid asf??

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    AyemSteph March 2, 2025 12:20 am

    Howww?

    leila March 4, 2025 3:02 am

    real I saw the comments n the rating n expected ts to change my life

    itsyaoighorl March 4, 2025 8:12 am
    Howww? AyemSteph

    This is so ordinary, if not bad. the plot, the romance feels forced. The only thing that i would remember this by is how boring ts for that high rating.

    AyemSteph March 5, 2025 6:48 am
    This is so ordinary, if not bad. the plot, the romance feels forced. The only thing that i would remember this by is how boring ts for that high rating. itsyaoighorl

    This is pretty good stuff abd that's coming from someone who's been reading bl for about 10 years now. Nothing feels forced here cuz u can literally feel the consent? And communication?. It's only shorter than I'd like it to be. Deserves the high rating tbh ...it's a good break from the forced consents and shitty semes(before they get character development).

    Lucia March 5, 2025 10:48 am
    This is pretty good stuff abd that's coming from someone who's been reading bl for about 10 years now. Nothing feels forced here cuz u can literally feel the consent? And communication?. It's only shorter than ... AyemSteph

    Consent + communication ≠ good story.


    Stories can be healthy and shit but be as stale as an old bread, therefore mid asf— basically it could be your basis for a good story, but not for others

    itsyaoighorl March 5, 2025 7:08 pm
    This is pretty good stuff abd that's coming from someone who's been reading bl for about 10 years now. Nothing feels forced here cuz u can literally feel the consent? And communication?. It's only shorter than ... AyemSteph

    oh wow, 10 years. Maybe u should get a doctorate for that jk HAHAHAHAHA. Kidding aside, i don't care really. U do u. have a nice day(▰˘◡˘▰)

    AyemSteph March 8, 2025 4:25 pm
    Consent + communication ≠ good story. Stories can be healthy and shit but be as stale as an old bread, therefore mid asf— basically it could be your basis for a good story, but not for others Lucia

    Well,this wasn't shii. I understand you and I have read wholesome stuff that ain't the best but this is a solid 8/10. No pushover uke and a communicative couple... deserves the high ratings
    I mean,many ppl must see it too cuz it's rated high but yeah, different strokes for different folks

    AyemSteph March 8, 2025 4:27 pm
    oh wow, 10 years. Maybe u should get a doctorate for that jk HAHAHAHAHA. Kidding aside, i don't care really. U do u. have a nice day(▰˘◡˘▰) itsyaoighorl

    I should probably . It's chill,you do do.

    Lucia March 9, 2025 3:24 am
    Well,this wasn't shii. I understand you and I have read wholesome stuff that ain't the best but this is a solid 8/10. No pushover uke and a communicative couple... deserves the high ratings I mean,many ppl mus... AyemSteph

    I don't mind repetitive plot and fluff, for me the deal breaker is the execution of the story and dialogue, how entertaining it'll get regardless of how common the plot is

    AyemSteph March 10, 2025 6:47 am
    I don't mind repetitive plot and fluff, for me the deal breaker is the execution of the story and dialogue, how entertaining it'll get regardless of how common the plot is Lucia

    I do get you. Tho,there was pretty much good dialogue here but yeah, execution of the story could be better,but that's me wanting more chapters. Anyway,the author-san still did okay