Its ok. I like the concept but like, idk theres just something off about the plot dialogue...

CimmicaCocoa March 1, 2025 4:51 pm

Its ok. I like the concept but like, idk theres just something off about the plot dialogue and stuff. Like it drags in weird places? The pacing and character interactions just feel out of place.

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    cherry blossom March 3, 2025 12:18 pm

    reallll, it's all over the place lol
    but it's really cutee, maybe it will make more sense if there's more chapter

    wennwenns March 3, 2025 10:47 pm

    it makes more sense in the novel. i think they’re just skimming through it , its pacing is really fast and lots of small details r lowkey missed out when compared to the novel

    Kim Dokjas Waist March 3, 2025 10:48 pm

    Ya it is a little weird. The novel was much better. I reccomend reading the novel if you like the concept. Itll make a lot more sense and youll get more details on certain things.

    In case ur interested in the novel ill provide a link ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~
    https://mentoltrans.wordpress.com/episode-1-prologue/

    CimmicaCocoa March 5, 2025 6:46 am
    Ya it is a little weird. The novel was much better. I reccomend reading the novel if you like the concept. Itll make a lot more sense and youll get more details on certain things. In case ur interested in the n... Kim Dokjas Waist

    ooOOO TY