Okay so i loved this webtoon and im just glad that its got a happy ending. I especially loved how they tackled Cirrus’ trauma with Skylar helping him heal. But am i the only one partly unsatisfied?
I feel like there were subplots here that could have been explored more. The parents situation, Skylar no longer being overly conscious of their relationship, or at least the two of them are finally able to tell their friends circle about them.
Lastly, i think this is just me but the way they confronted each other about their issues, i think with the way its written, it doesn’t really come off as them talking about their specific issues with each other but just acknowledging and then skipping to the next point. Like we went from saying really hurtful shit and misunderstanding each other and then the next time they talk, i was like “oh they’re okay now? that quick? oh now they’re kissing, hold on what about what he said—” lmfao i keep coming back and rereading pages because it felt like i was skipping some dialogue but no, that’s just it
While the art is goddamn beautiful, i find the writing a bit lacking. I even gave it a second read because maybe i was too swept away by the art so i missed some speech bubbles or monologues lol.
Okay so i loved this webtoon and im just glad that its got a happy ending. I especially loved how they tackled Cirrus’ trauma with Skylar helping him heal. But am i the only one partly unsatisfied?
I feel like there were subplots here that could have been explored more. The parents situation, Skylar no longer being overly conscious of their relationship, or at least the two of them are finally able to tell their friends circle about them.
Lastly, i think this is just me but the way they confronted each other about their issues, i think with the way its written, it doesn’t really come off as them talking about their specific issues with each other but just acknowledging and then skipping to the next point. Like we went from saying really hurtful shit and misunderstanding each other and then the next time they talk, i was like “oh they’re okay now? that quick? oh now they’re kissing, hold on what about what he said—” lmfao i keep coming back and rereading pages because it felt like i was skipping some dialogue but no, that’s just it
While the art is goddamn beautiful, i find the writing a bit lacking. I even gave it a second read because maybe i was too swept away by the art so i missed some speech bubbles or monologues lol.