While I did enjoy the story & its overall progression, the ML fell short for me. The end was so violent, & the whole justification that the other alphas wouldn't stop him bc they didn't want to be supressed feeds into the whole issue that alphas are above the law (remember that alpha attorney that was drunk & in rut?). There was so much to be explored & fixed there, but instead the ML just used it to his advantage & deeper societal issues are perpetuated.
Another comment--I honestly liked the red head character. Good design, clever (albeit petty & obv the bad guy), but him dying at the end was too much. I felt like we needed to get into a deeper dive into his character, or I could've seen a great spin-off story potential with him becoming a better person.
Idk, ig I'm a bit biased bc I'm a sucker for the small eyed characters & was a bit annoyed all the "good" guys had big doe eyes
While I did enjoy the story & its overall progression, the ML fell short for me. The end was so violent, & the whole justification that the other alphas wouldn't stop him bc they didn't want to be supressed feeds into the whole issue that alphas are above the law (remember that alpha attorney that was drunk & in rut?). There was so much to be explored & fixed there, but instead the ML just used it to his advantage & deeper societal issues are perpetuated.
Another comment--I honestly liked the red head character. Good design, clever (albeit petty & obv the bad guy), but him dying at the end was too much. I felt like we needed to get into a deeper dive into his character, or I could've seen a great spin-off story potential with him becoming a better person.
Idk, ig I'm a bit biased bc I'm a sucker for the small eyed characters & was a bit annoyed all the "good" guys had big doe eyes