The story had potential

Okkichu February 25, 2025 9:55 pm

It lacked fine tuning, and could have polished some plot points.

I can’t give specific moments since it’s been a hot minute since I read from the beginning, but it just gave the feeling of lost potential in the story. The characters though, I really enjoyed!
So I hope we get more from the author in terms of new stories with fun characters.

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