The story is really interesting, the art is not giving tho. It's tolerable.

I need to get used to this art style (￣∇￣") But it's somehow not working LOL.....

Yeah ngl... I'm trying real hard... but it's not helping... it just feels... kinda silly? Not only I cant feel the seriousness of it at all... it's even making me start to dislike the mc? Because lets be honest he looks like one of those braggy edge teenagers... I want to like it but it's all feeling so 8th grade syndrome...
And the artstyle of the characters and the background doesn't match ar all...
It feels like someone colored manga characters cut them and pasted them on kr webcomics backgrounds... y'all remember old animations were we always knew what object would be intereacted with because their art was different from the rest? It's kinda like it... and the whitish contour separates them even more from the background making it distoate even more...
Sorry... not really wanting to bash the artist but... I've seen worse is not exactly a compliment..

Exactly that