So after I finished the story and I have some things to say. One, the story falls flat on a couple different occasions. In moments where the main couple should be communicating, they go straight to sex. It’s annoying. Usually I eat the sex scenes up but in this case I just skipped through them. The plot was easy to follow but it didn’t really keep me super hooked. It did keep me hooked enough to finish it without a problem but this wouldn’t be the first on my list to recommend to other people. Second, I’m not a fan of what the author had Soobin do. It just felt really out of character for him to SA Hyesung. Because up until this moment even tho Soobin loved Hyesung, he never wanted to hurt him. Plus he had many opportunities to do this before so why now? Hyesung must have been drunk around Soobin (Soobin didn’t know he was drugged atp) but he never SAd him so it doesn’t feel like it’s in character for him. Third, even tho Hyobum did something horrible and disgusting to Hyesung, I can’t help but feel some sympathy for him. He was roofied by a sponsor and then raped. And then raped multiple times afterwards. He then developed an addiction to drugs that his rapist was forcing him to take. And the entire time when he was raped, his rapist talked about Yoo-il and comparing him. Tbh I would start to hate Yoo-il too. Overall, a fine story it could just be improved.
So after I finished the story and I have some things to say. One, the story falls flat on a couple different occasions. In moments where the main couple should be communicating, they go straight to sex. It’s annoying. Usually I eat the sex scenes up but in this case I just skipped through them. The plot was easy to follow but it didn’t really keep me super hooked. It did keep me hooked enough to finish it without a problem but this wouldn’t be the first on my list to recommend to other people. Second, I’m not a fan of what the author had Soobin do. It just felt really out of character for him to SA Hyesung. Because up until this moment even tho Soobin loved Hyesung, he never wanted to hurt him. Plus he had many opportunities to do this before so why now? Hyesung must have been drunk around Soobin (Soobin didn’t know he was drugged atp) but he never SAd him so it doesn’t feel like it’s in character for him. Third, even tho Hyobum did something horrible and disgusting to Hyesung, I can’t help but feel some sympathy for him. He was roofied by a sponsor and then raped. And then raped multiple times afterwards. He then developed an addiction to drugs that his rapist was forcing him to take. And the entire time when he was raped, his rapist talked about Yoo-il and comparing him. Tbh I would start to hate Yoo-il too. Overall, a fine story it could just be improved.