I remember reading this and throwing a 1 star rating because the ending hurt my heart, but lemme be more rational: Art style: Pretty good, not to the level where I can say chef's kiss. A little bonus bc I liked the dead, soulless eyes ML has (had an eerie feel to it). 3.5/5 Pacing: I can't lie, this story felt like a segment from the real plot. The story offered at least some sort of backstory, and didn't feel as rushed. 3/5 Plot: If I remember well the plot was finding his long lost brother, which he wasn't supposed to. Bro didn't even know the restaurant owner was his brother. I mean plot was meh, ML was just a crazy fuck and MC happened to be quite unfortunate. 2/5 smut: maybe I just don't get off with seeing mc get burnt, but I couldn't even overlook past the rape to judge the sex scenes in itself. 2/5 ending: subjective ofc, ending was quite vague but I can only hope MC cuts ties with the organization. Unfortunately that'll never be the case. 2/5 overall : 2.5, contemplating if I should round it down to a 2. I don't despise the story, it's honestly just sad
I remember reading this and throwing a 1 star rating because the ending hurt my heart, but lemme be more rational:
Art style: Pretty good, not to the level where I can say chef's kiss. A little bonus bc I liked the dead, soulless eyes ML has (had an eerie feel to it). 3.5/5
Pacing: I can't lie, this story felt like a segment from the real plot. The story offered at least some sort of backstory, and didn't feel as rushed. 3/5
Plot: If I remember well the plot was finding his long lost brother, which he wasn't supposed to. Bro didn't even know the restaurant owner was his brother. I mean plot was meh, ML was just a crazy fuck and MC happened to be quite unfortunate. 2/5
smut: maybe I just don't get off with seeing mc get burnt, but I couldn't even overlook past the rape to judge the sex scenes in itself. 2/5
ending: subjective ofc, ending was quite vague but I can only hope MC cuts ties with the organization. Unfortunately that'll never be the case. 2/5
overall : 2.5, contemplating if I should round it down to a 2. I don't despise the story, it's honestly just sad