Oh my I also think so! The art is cute and really pretty the base story line is also super unique and interesting but I feel like there are to many clichés and not enough inner monologues. Many character apart from the fl seem flat and heir enemy / competition is just a bratty kid she isn't even truly evil just a snoty brat that was used for the schemes of the grown ups and even those don't seem like the ultimate villian they are just selfish and kinda stupid none of their schemes even worked out for a second everyone knew she was the real daughter.
All in all its still interesting and super unique as you said! And I hope the portraition of the story gets more depth~
Indeedd, the author and the artist are doing fine just looking forward for the improvement!! And please dont misunderstand me Im not saying Im any better at writing stories or even drawing, I am just saying what I think as a reader.
But thank god! Im so happy someone managed to understand what I meant, I was scared that someone could misunderstand my intentions. I am not from any Western countries, Im asian but its true English is my first language but I kind of like forgot how to use words or things like that so whenever I talk or chat with someone people tend to misunderstand me bcs the way I use my words is very misleading--at least thats what they say.
Nah your fine! It's true what you say I think Westeners are just too soft? When they like smth they get their panties twisted reall quick when you critique smth even if it's true (－.－)
Ohhhh phew thank you
Hmmm its interesting but maybe its because the way the artist executed the story it feels lacking but it is still interesting, it has a very good potential so I am looking forward for the update. The art is nice but the expression is lacking yet thanks to the dialogues I kind of got the grasp what the character is feeling hoping the artist keeps up and also continue to improve!! The author is also good but there are some things that is so confusing but I managed to grasp it after thinking about it for a few minutes lololol but still its a good story, average execution (not good nor bad, just fine) and Im looking forward for both the artist and the author!!!
#lovelovelove