Story pretty good. It was nice and easy read. I do have some problems with it tho i wish that ml didn't go so crazy in love so fast. In one scene he hates all nobles the next he's in love with MC. I wish we got a chapter or so of ml seeing how much mc is trying and then slowly start having feelings. It's nice to see a shorter and completed story but i do belive it would benefit from couple more chapters definitely a chapter or two at the beginning and especially flash out his nephew. Crom the moment we learned about ml family unil basically last chapter i wasn't sure of the nephew survived. I really wished to see more of their relationships bc it was very interesting but the way it was presented to us was very rush ( no surprise there when you introduce him in the last 2-3 chapters). So definitely the pacing could had been better and overall a bit more flash out story. But my biggest complaint was the SA it was completely unecessary at this point the main couple didn't really needed a push and even if a bit then i still SA was too much. And not too happy that their first sex scene was when mc was drunk.
Story pretty good. It was nice and easy read. I do have some problems with it tho i wish that ml didn't go so crazy in love so fast. In one scene he hates all nobles the next he's in love with MC. I wish we got a chapter or so of ml seeing how much mc is trying and then slowly start having feelings. It's nice to see a shorter and completed story but i do belive it would benefit from couple more chapters definitely a chapter or two at the beginning and especially flash out his nephew. Crom the moment we learned about ml family unil basically last chapter i wasn't sure of the nephew survived. I really wished to see more of their relationships bc it was very interesting but the way it was presented to us was very rush ( no surprise there when you introduce him in the last 2-3 chapters). So definitely the pacing could had been better and overall a bit more flash out story. But my biggest complaint was the SA it was completely unecessary at this point the main couple didn't really needed a push and even if a bit then i still SA was too much. And not too happy that their first sex scene was when mc was drunk.