ALTERNATIVE ARGUMENT READ UNDER YOUR OWN CHOICE

zeugi February 22, 2025 4:53 pm

Well, I looove our female and male protagonist (and his father holly smokes ) but somehow something it's lacking for me. I would have liked for ex-husband to have appeared more, to see him suffer, fall into despair, repent to find too late that all his efforts to gain his ex wife back are in vain. To see his face contrite with pain and regret, to scar his face from digging his nails under his eyes from frustration...and then see the arc where FL can finally find happiness with her new squeeze (and his father

Responses
    rubyjanee February 22, 2025 6:49 pm

    this!! and suddenly the ml is so lacking in expressions it feels like im reading a different story now

    zeugi February 22, 2025 7:11 pm
    this!! and suddenly the ml is so lacking in expressions it feels like im reading a different story now rubyjanee

    For real, reading the ML expressions is watching a foreign movie without subs,we can only guess if hes happy, showing contempt or horny by the surrounding context ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    rubyjanee February 23, 2025 4:13 pm
    For real, reading the ML expressions is watching a foreign movie without subs,we can only guess if hes happy, showing contempt or horny by the surrounding context ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ zeugi

    ikr and I hate how rushed their first time was I wish it was after they properly communicated their feelings