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It's for the reader's benefit...he's talking aloud to narrate his thoughts and what's going on and give us context...Considering it's an adaptation from a novel which is narration dense, that makes sense. Geez.
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I'm still in chapter 9 but it frustrates me so much when the mc doesn't actually get to the guiding immediately and fills the panels with his thoughts for 50 pages before he actually starts to guide.
He took the same approach for guiding the younger seme & also the younger seme. Wth!!! It's kind of irritating. If you're a veteran professional, don't waste time like an amateur and get to it