Chemistry... Environment... Yep, I was expecting less of a transaction after all the dramas they have lived together. But oh well, not every author and story has to be tender, sweet, romantic ....
Not every story has to be tender yes, but there's definitely some level of skill that needs to be there in the storytelling part. Some objective component that makes even the most bland scene appealing for the reader. That's the thing that's lacking here. The scene isn't that bad, it's the way they're showing the scene that's piss poor.
Sorry, not attacking you here, I agree with you. I'm just adding to my original point.
I never found chemistry between them, but that is my perception. I do not find the characters and their personalities a match for each other. In fact, more like brother-sister in arms than anything.
I do not feel attacked ma dear, in fact I agree with you. This last "I'll marry him" looks like a convenient transaction because they do not hate each other, but there is no proper love either.
Do not bother, I love to find different opinions, sometimes people have good points over here (づ￣ ³￣)づ
yo cmon what the hell? The chemistry really is not chemistrying. The confession scene after literal YEARS of angst and pining they've done is just her walking into the room and saying it casually? Like, even if that's the lowkey kind of vibe they want to go for, there's a way to make it look interesting. But here, it felt like it happened so monotonically, there's no highs and lows, no anticipation, so bland. This is supposed to be the grand payoff, why is it so lame??
The author is NOT cooking with this one ooof.