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Okay so I never read it and I never read your comment fully but whatever your on about... Valid... And I should have no opinion but... Slay... Yeah that's all I came here to do
me too like oh yes i agree but I’ve never read it
This was so shit. Everyone here needs to go to either prison or a mental hospital. but mostly prison.
these plot points were written by a 14yo and the story was goven then to adults to expand and put into writing and paper without being allowed to change the plot points in any way to make sense, and I will die on that hill.
in the first place, WHO ON EARTH JUST ACCEPTS A RANDOM DRUG THAT YOU WERE GIVEN BY A PERSON YOU HAVEN'T SEEN IN 6 YEARS AFTER A 3 MINUTE HURRIED CONVERSATION????? AND HE FUCKING TOOK IT THAT NIGHT? uke, are you stupid? are you mental? are you that slow, is it that kind of a story??? fuck, on that page I was having alarms ring in my head already, fucking disaster leven sirens screaming at me, but the idiot was just idioting around. And after he got tricked into turn into an omega, kidnapped and raped for days straight, he's still like -im gonna kick him cause he was mean- no no no, you gonna go to the police you fucking dipshit, go report him imidiately! and the other dipshit that saved him is like - i kno you got kidnapped and raped and drugged and other stuff, but instead of police or hospital, how about I take you to another one of your attacker's victim and tell you my backstory?- and what do you know, the other victim magically wakes up from the coma that moment, yey. funny thing is, you could explain it actually, say that because dipshit 2 didn't even let dipshit 1 take a shower before dragging the rape victim into coma person's hospital room, dipshit 1 was still covered in rapist's pheromones and maybe the coma person felt them and reacted and that's why he woke up, but guess what, story doesn't give a fuck to imply that. coma person just magically wakes up after his story was told to +1 persons, and proceeds to say rapist is of no blame for what happened to me, it was me who OD.ed. which is fair enough, they were both forced into fated pair pairing as children, but after coma person sais he forgives rapist, everyone is like... you go girl, go fight for your lover - to dipshit 1. and I hate it. literary, rapist ml is my favourite because he's just evil and selfish, and not stupid, he knows he deserved prison. and fuck that other doctor too, he deserves prison as well