To summarize, it's like watching a bunch of kids with too much power go and wreck havoc because the adults are crazy, incompetent, or have been tossed aside by the author.
The FL is written poorly. To promote the "plot" the author forces her to deal with that silver haired saintess valentine or whatever and makes every villain so...so dumb. That in turn, makes the FL idiotic too. The choices she makes are questionable. Her growth is minimal too (we can see why, refer back to sentence 1)
Just mentioning the major things that stand out. Wasted enough of my time. Don't waste yours.
To summarize, it's like watching a bunch of kids with too much power go and wreck havoc because the adults are crazy, incompetent, or have been tossed aside by the author.
The FL is written poorly. To promote the "plot" the author forces her to deal with that silver haired saintess valentine or whatever and makes every villain so...so dumb. That in turn, makes the FL idiotic too. The choices she makes are questionable. Her growth is minimal too (we can see why, refer back to sentence 1)
Just mentioning the major things that stand out. Wasted enough of my time. Don't waste yours.