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Idk, i've read a lot of works(on ao3, wattpad and officially published ) written by women, including the type you mentioned and i've never seen one written by a girl, which involves a guy who makes these types of comments that are generally too unattractive and flat for the female gaze. On the other hand, i've read plenty of male gaze hentai that are pretty similar regarding the personality of the woman and the man in this manhwa.
Did a man write this?
I was all for it until the incely 'slept with a lot of guys' comments of the guy and the obvious fact that the sex scenes were written by a virgin(although i don't necessarily require realism for smut). Not to mention the 'submissive' comments and the reactions of fl which very much remind me of the male gaze hentai archetype.