I really like this but the way that the dialogue was handled after the antagonist showed up was so heavy-handed and unnatural that it kind of threw me out of the story a little.. luckily it was only like two separate scenes of strange info-dumpy stilted dialogue but it was so unexpected because I've read this author before and know they are usually much better at suble plot hint drops than that Σ( ￣□￣||)
I really like this but the way that the dialogue was handled after the antagonist showed up was so heavy-handed and unnatural that it kind of threw me out of the story a little.. luckily it was only like two separate scenes of strange info-dumpy stilted dialogue but it was so unexpected because I've read this author before and know they are usually much better at suble plot hint drops than that Σ( ￣□￣||)