Don't get me wrong, it's a good story but it can be better...also pls have the ml show more of his maturity than his immature side...I thought fl was older than ml...at least lessen the amount of bickering whether it's w other ppl or w fl URGH especially during the fight, just focus on fighting like wut the servant said bout it not being the time to woo her. Both the ml n FL aren't exactly tht lovable either, maybe it's the dialogues? They're always shouting :(
Don't get me wrong, it's a good story but it can be better...also pls have the ml show more of his maturity than his immature side...I thought fl was older than ml...at least lessen the amount of bickering whether it's w other ppl or w fl URGH especially during the fight, just focus on fighting like wut the servant said bout it not being the time to woo her. Both the ml n FL aren't exactly tht lovable either, maybe it's the dialogues? They're always shouting :(