This story feels like a draft. It feels kind of like the alpha to the complete version of the story, it feels like a final draft that you get to tally up when you can add a bunch of stuff. I take it back. This feels like a beta to an Alpha draft Because in the last version of the draft you at least have everything. like there’s a clear difference between being mediocre and a story being rushed, and this feels like both like there’s holes and things that need to be added to the story like it’s super obvious and that’s a problem. It’s one thing if the author just did not feel like adding it, but it’s completely different when it felt obviously lacking
This story feels like a draft. It feels kind of like the alpha to the complete version of the story, it feels like a final draft that you get to tally up when you can add a bunch of stuff. I take it back. This feels like a beta to an Alpha draft Because in the last version of the draft you at least have everything. like there’s a clear difference between being mediocre and a story being rushed, and this feels like both like there’s holes and things that need to be added to the story like it’s super obvious and that’s a problem. It’s one thing if the author just did not feel like adding it, but it’s completely different when it felt obviously lacking