The first story was interesting, but I didn't like the main couple. Nothing wrong with them, but Takeru fell in love really quickly, and Ray only liked Takeru because he reminded him of his first love. Yeah, he said at the end that he loved Takeru, but it wasn't believable because they barely knew each other, and Ray kept on searching for Takeru's mom until he found out she was dead. So yeah, Takeru felt like a replacement. I also didn't feel any real attachment to Takeru, because he was the typical uke whose whole personality is being cute and gullible and in love with the seme (for whatever reason). That cliché may work in some stories, but the lack of development between the couple didn't help with his character. I would have love to see more of Chester, I really liked his character.
Second story had potencial, but the unnecessary rap* scene ruined everything for me
The first story was interesting, but I didn't like the main couple. Nothing wrong with them, but Takeru fell in love really quickly, and Ray only liked Takeru because he reminded him of his first love. Yeah, he said at the end that he loved Takeru, but it wasn't believable because they barely knew each other, and Ray kept on searching for Takeru's mom until he found out she was dead. So yeah, Takeru felt like a replacement. I also didn't feel any real attachment to Takeru, because he was the typical uke whose whole personality is being cute and gullible and in love with the seme (for whatever reason). That cliché may work in some stories, but the lack of development between the couple didn't help with his character. I would have love to see more of Chester, I really liked his character.
Second story had potencial, but the unnecessary rap* scene ruined everything for me