The whole Etzel wotan dating and introducing a second couple 10 chapters in was so unnecessary. The second couple got screen time for like idk two chapters so their story didn’t even finish ???(I didn’t care about them bc I don’t like etzel). Everything was rushed but at the same time it wasn’t ?? And the nephew thing felt weird to me. Don’t get me started on the rape part. I hate how common it is in bl‘s. It’s a weird short story. Not entirely bad but also not that good.
The whole Etzel wotan dating and introducing a second couple 10 chapters in was so unnecessary. The second couple got screen time for like idk two chapters so their story didn’t even finish ???(I didn’t care about them bc I don’t like etzel).
Everything was rushed but at the same time it wasn’t ?? And the nephew thing felt weird to me. Don’t get me started on the rape part. I hate how common it is in bl‘s. It’s a weird short story. Not entirely bad but also not that good.