The premise was rather entertaining, I liked that he acted like the beast he is without actually being a complete ass. I feel this was well divided, because most authors tend to mix "beast" with "abusive", yeah the dude is an idiot but again that was the plot. However, right now I feel the story is being dragged waaaay too long, it's been a few chapters now that nothing is happening just the same plot repeating over and over, and now we have these... whatever it were chapters, for a topic that coukd have been covered in half a chapter. The constant "I'm pregnant??" ... "oh jeez I wasn't" has dragged for too long and doesn't seem to be for a reason. Editor has started milking this story and that sucks.
The premise was rather entertaining, I liked that he acted like the beast he is without actually being a complete ass. I feel this was well divided, because most authors tend to mix "beast" with "abusive", yeah the dude is an idiot but again that was the plot.
However, right now I feel the story is being dragged waaaay too long, it's been a few chapters now that nothing is happening just the same plot repeating over and over, and now we have these... whatever it were chapters, for a topic that coukd have been covered in half a chapter.
The constant "I'm pregnant??" ... "oh jeez I wasn't" has dragged for too long and doesn't seem to be for a reason.
Editor has started milking this story and that sucks.