i wanted bro to yearn

silvynars February 14, 2025 5:34 am

i wanted the chasing arc to be lime 15 chs longer and it would just be him being pathetic while other dude just genuinely hates him (i lowk gorgot their names) and i was thinking of like a scene where he finds his clothes at his house and just smells it thinking anout how much he likes him idk. i want him to be YEARNING and pathetic cuz like who doesnt love pathetic men ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

Responses
    Groovy February 14, 2025 5:42 am

    Tbh I get bored watching characters be pathetic. That’s not what I’m here for.

    silvynars February 14, 2025 5:43 am
    Tbh I get bored watching characters be pathetic. That’s not what I’m here for. Groovy

    do u like the pace of the story rn??? (⌒▽⌒)

    Groovy February 14, 2025 11:37 am
    do u like the pace of the story rn??? (⌒▽⌒) silvynars

    Yeah I do! I let it cook a while after they both got put in the hospital, but now I’m back to reading every week. Wby?

    silvynars February 14, 2025 11:45 am
    Yeah I do! I let it cook a while after they both got put in the hospital, but now I’m back to reading every week. Wby? Groovy

    mehhh its alrr i feel like the bottom couldve held out a lil longer after what he went through. yk stand his ground and stuff ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭