I wish this was more developed, the art is really pretty and so are the characters... But the plot falls slightly flat for me. They have motive and a decent plot, but I think the pacing and execution is what needed more work. I still enjoy this and definitely want to see it finished, but their feelings and their relationship is feeling pretty superficial.... Then again it's not finished yet and idk how many more chapters there will be so this could change!
I wish this was more developed, the art is really pretty and so are the characters... But the plot falls slightly flat for me. They have motive and a decent plot, but I think the pacing and execution is what needed more work. I still enjoy this and definitely want to see it finished, but their feelings and their relationship is feeling pretty superficial.... Then again it's not finished yet and idk how many more chapters there will be so this could change!