this really was such wasted potential. it’s clear the author was more interesting in writing sex, than fleshing out a good story.
we really waited until the very last chapter for them to get together, and that too, it ended up with sex. i expected the side stories to be some fluff, and fill in some gaps, but it was just MORE sex.
what about yi-hyun’s offer to study abroad? what about his mother, why do we never see her? does she even live with the kids? speaking of the siblings, yi-hyun’s younger brother shouldve ended up with seungwoo. also, making seungwoo pine after woojoo like that was low-key LOW-KEY very low-key weird of the author. like i know he’s 18 and everything, but why would you want to make a potential love interest be in high school while the mc is in university like? and the fact that they were childhood friends, but woojoo really couldnt gaf about seungwoo, GIVE SEUNGWOO A BREAK
also, making seungwoo a potential love interest was so dumb. woojoo went all the way to seoul for his crush, not seungwoo. shouldve just made woojoo do nothing while crush was away, and then he moves on right before the crush comes back from the military. that way, woojoo and yi-hyun still follow the events of the story, but in a timeline where the crush is discharged and when he comes back, it’ll create a bit of conflict when he bumps into woojoo again.
idk, it’s like you can just tell the author didnt put much thought into the actual story. no fluff, no domesticity, barely addressing yi-hyun’s ptsd - esp when he took the taxi to the hospital, oh my baby - like, why aren’t we focusing on plot?? i’m tired of bls only revolving around sex. if the author wanted to write smut so bad, write a short ten chapter porn story instead of writing this
this really was such wasted potential. it’s clear the author was more interesting in writing sex, than fleshing out a good story.
we really waited until the very last chapter for them to get together, and that too, it ended up with sex. i expected the side stories to be some fluff, and fill in some gaps, but it was just MORE sex.
what about yi-hyun’s offer to study abroad? what about his mother, why do we never see her? does she even live with the kids? speaking of the siblings, yi-hyun’s younger brother shouldve ended up with seungwoo. also, making seungwoo pine after woojoo like that was low-key LOW-KEY very low-key weird of the author. like i know he’s 18 and everything, but why would you want to make a potential love interest be in high school while the mc is in university like? and the fact that they were childhood friends, but woojoo really couldnt gaf about seungwoo, GIVE SEUNGWOO A BREAK
also, making seungwoo a potential love interest was so dumb. woojoo went all the way to seoul for his crush, not seungwoo. shouldve just made woojoo do nothing while crush was away, and then he moves on right before the crush comes back from the military. that way, woojoo and yi-hyun still follow the events of the story, but in a timeline where the crush is discharged and when he comes back, it’ll create a bit of conflict when he bumps into woojoo again.
idk, it’s like you can just tell the author didnt put much thought into the actual story. no fluff, no domesticity, barely addressing yi-hyun’s ptsd - esp when he took the taxi to the hospital, oh my baby - like, why aren’t we focusing on plot?? i’m tired of bls only revolving around sex. if the author wanted to write smut so bad, write a short ten chapter porn story instead of writing this