PERSONALLY I THINK IT EATS.Yes, the plot is fast paced but it’s meant to be.
The only issues I have is 1. The age gap is crazy in this one 2. The art in a few panels could 100% be better. 3. Open plot (who the dad married and why mc looks similar to the princess, ending result with side couple etc.)
That’s literally it, lmao.
Because despite the simple writing the author added a good conflict between the two. Added a whole side couple, gave the family enough character without needing to go deep into their past, a bit of humor, and had a sweet ending!
And despite MC having a leaner frame, proved mc can hold his weight with his sword! Which gives more depth into mcs character.
PERSONALLY I THINK IT EATS.Yes, the plot is fast paced but it’s meant to be.
The only issues I have is
1. The age gap is crazy in this one
2. The art in a few panels could 100% be better.
3. Open plot (who the dad married and why mc looks similar to the princess, ending result with side couple etc.)
That’s literally it, lmao.
Because despite the simple writing the author added a good conflict between the two. Added a whole side couple, gave the family enough character without needing to go deep into their past, a bit of humor, and had a sweet ending!
And despite MC having a leaner frame, proved mc can hold his weight with his sword! Which gives more depth into mcs character.
So my rating is a 8.89/10