the smut was mid let’s be fr
inner dialogue means jack pewp if your partner doesn't see any hint of your pleasure. i love that she's finally getting good peen and the joy that is being overwhelmed by pleasure but it's still not a great start because he's fooked in the head, she's traumatized, and he's a whole ass liar, fine shyt big willy and all, so the least we could get was more passion. of course he's twitching, she's tight and warm and hot and he's been waiting for this moment, but for all that buildup, i think its okay that readers wanted a little more, including gooner material lmao. i want to see her nipples.
i just said it wasn’t
maybe it’s just me but i don’t just read for the smut. im here for the plot so i really do not care if they weren’t on some straight porn from the get go. it’s not like this’ll be the last time they’ll fuck so it’ll get better from here. i just feel as though mfs don’t understand the characters or the plot to understand why it’s “underwhelming” to them
the smut was not underwhelming at all i should smack the hell out the the comments who said that. i think it was good for both of their first time together. it was his first time ever knowing he was a virgin before this and maybe the expressions could have been better but i just took it as him trying not to lose complete control out to not hurt her, you know? cause judging from his twitching & his own inner dialogue from previous chapter, he’s enjoying himself a lot. now, for her it’s good that she’s experiencing pleasure that actually feels good for her. she loves it cause he’s not worrying about getting himself off like her trash ex husband. he’s making sure she’s comfortable & enjoying herself as well. idk everyone can have their own opinions but i think this was a good start to their intimacy together. i really do not care about censorship to be honest like yall gooned the fuck out to want to see his cawk that badly. im kidding.