Dude, the story lost its essence

Frosche79 February 11, 2025 1:05 am

Okay, there are a lot of things going wrong here and I'll start with, WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO THE STORY?

It had a good start, a good storyline, good lines, but then it's over 50 chapters and everything slowly went downhill like a pile of trash.

The things that were of importance like the evolution of the MC's minions, apart from Lye, they were no longer included in the story. I mean, we see the Griffin as a chick in one chapter and the next he got big all of a sudden. All the other minions were the same. I thought this was a story about taming monsters and yet I no longer see the essence of taming them and the progress of training them.

Also, I have no problem with the romance bit but aren't they doing it too fast? Not just that, they made every scene happen so fast it's like I reading this in fast forward.

I was actually looking forward to the battle of the guilds, especially the second round because the MC went on and say it's gonna be harder than the first round but then--poof! Nothing. No battle, no fights, no nothing. They skipped that arc and just ended it without even telling us the results.

Everything is happening so fast here and the story is losing its quality just a fast.

I think I really liked the story to the part where the MC got the Griffin, but beyond that, the story is like hail Mary.

I'm rather disappointed. It's not worth the ratings if the story is this crappy. It's very painful for me as a reader that something so good, with potential, and that started off really well, fell like this.

I'm out. Not gonna waste more time here otherwise I'll be slandering this story.

Responses
    Nizze March 25, 2025 9:02 am

    I can't even begin to say how much I agree with you!
    To me things were really good till the point he got his char to the previous one's level... after that... things slowly began to go downhill... the story lost all focus on taming and it all went to guild wars and main quest plotline? of the game instead... like mc didn't give 2shts about his guild and out of no-frigging-where he went to guild wars against top ranked guilds in the game when his guild wasn't even top 10? Plot armor is strong on this one... at some point it just... stopped being interesting.
    Now it just feels like author keeps escalating things just to have something to write about instead of finishing it? Like... where is this going? What could be the ending of it? It already makes no sense no more...