Good, but

Grein M May 10, 2017 1:53 am

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Okay, I do think this was good, but it could have been better. I think the author should have shown the brother to have been more upset over his brother's death. This story felt rushed, but had so much potential! Ko chan and hiro were so in love and then the accident happens and Hiro is taken by his abusive half brother for five years. He shows up and Takuro confesses he loved Hiro and I know it's been 5 years and he's probably healed despite being abused for 5 years, but he seems to move on to the brother fairly easily. If there had been more chapters and more depth put into this one, it would be amazing.

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