I can’t really get into and that’s just me ig. I feel like it’s lacking something, something more humane. It feels a bit empty or awkward at times as if the writer has read a bunch of stories similar to this one then took a piece of each story to try to come up with their own. The characters feel incomplete like their personalities haven’t been rightly put together. It just feels like something is missing and because of that I can’t tune into the emotions the writer is trying to express… It does have a great plot tho, but I just can’t seem to stay interested enough to see it through. Also again this is my honest opinion! I have no hate or anything for this story and I hope everyone else enjoys reading it!
I can’t really get into and that’s just me ig. I feel like it’s lacking something, something more humane. It feels a bit empty or awkward at times as if the writer has read a bunch of stories similar to this one then took a piece of each story to try to come up with their own. The characters feel incomplete like their personalities haven’t been rightly put together. It just feels like something is missing and because of that I can’t tune into the emotions the writer is trying to express… It does have a great plot tho, but I just can’t seem to stay interested enough to see it through. Also again this is my honest opinion! I have no hate or anything for this story and I hope everyone else enjoys reading it!