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yeah i think the artist really like the flat expression on the ML, but while i think its good to have cool MC, im kinda hoping he would lose his compose, i meant he want the cookie so bad, i expect him to lose breath, face flushed and maybe loser grin even tho maybe that looks opposite of what he usually do, i think it will add the charm, i didnt expect he looks (._.) all the time
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i tried looking real hard and there's only like 2 moments when he loses it a bit but even at that he's straight face, but his body blushes. he does show his consideration for her by going by her pace, so i think he just doesn't express on his face but shows through body language. i do feel like if that's the case the artist should show it more... lollll
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oh ure right, i think if he express the eagerness it would be sexy and cute, like when she ask him to stop moving, he could shower her with kisses and matching their breath, and even begging her permission if he can put it deeper. i guess you can translate it that he also as clueless and not experienced bcs last time its hinted that hes a virgin too
is it just me or like the way they portrayed their intimate moment isnt really intimate at all? it just feels like wow sex there you go, i dont sense their desire, want, even romance from it. its just sex? im not sure how to describe it properly but i am just a tad bit disappointed.
there’s a lot of close ups too, the way its composed is meh imo, wording/dialogue doesn’t hit the way ig theyre trying to portray the moment? even then i just dont feel it
im not hating tbh i just feel like i expected more outta that but anyways