more than half of is lost at poor execution, charectors were good but still need a bit of ...

more than half of is lost at poor execution, charectors were good but still need a bit of work, the art style was the only this carrying the flow of the story... Not saying that I don't enjoy it but if feels like it failed to hit the mark, yep that the feeling after reading this...
Anyway if read without expectations this might be a okay "no-brainer" quick cute read