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I mean 23 is plenty of an adult
I’d have rather the son be 30-35 tho.
That way the gap isn’t too creepy but they’d still have the same dynamics. Since 23 is college age, but by 30 most ppl are established in their career, have stable income and finances, and live alone etc. it wouldn’t have affected the relationship dynamics *that* much
The age gap is pretty large, certainly not for everyone, but I think it's written well so far. MC is a bit young at 23, I'd love for him to be above 25 at least, but it's no grooming situation imo.
A lot of aspects of this story (age gap, poor/rich, inexperienced uke, SM) have the potential to get pretty toxic if not handled properly.
Still, there's a lot to like:
1. Enthusiastic Consent and interest in BDSM from both sides prior to the story
2. The MC and his love interest actually communicate (and do other things than fucking)
3. Aftercare and a decent respect for boundaries (although no mention of safe words so far unfortunately)
I'll definitely stay to see where this is going ╮(￣▽￣)╭