Even though I was more excited for the sex scene in this story rather than Just Twilight, the latter did a wayyyy better job on the delivery. The buildup and scene felt much more organic and hot there, even though this was more explicit and desired. I *wanted* the sex scene to happen here, while I was okay with a no smut story for JT. The active engagement from the fl in JT means much more than the experienced woman just giving in here.
I know a lot of people will defend Haesoo, and that's fine, even I defend her regularly in this comment section. She doesn't have to "perform" sex in a way that appeals to me and I'm sure there are many pillow princesses in the real world. But I still found the entire scene disappointing here, after all this buildup. I'm not expecting the Kama Sutra here, nor am I expecting a crazy ass ML. I even prefer safe, sane, consensual vanilla sex. BUT!!!
I don't have a lot of complaints from the ML here, but I'm still disappointed. I like the plot, I like the characters, I like the progression. I can't even put into words what irritated me here.
OKAY, I WAS SCARED TO SAY IT, BUT I'LL SAY IT NOW
Even though I was more excited for the sex scene in this story rather than Just Twilight, the latter did a wayyyy better job on the delivery. The buildup and scene felt much more organic and hot there, even though this was more explicit and desired. I *wanted* the sex scene to happen here, while I was okay with a no smut story for JT. The active engagement from the fl in JT means much more than the experienced woman just giving in here.
I know a lot of people will defend Haesoo, and that's fine, even I defend her regularly in this comment section. She doesn't have to "perform" sex in a way that appeals to me and I'm sure there are many pillow princesses in the real world. But I still found the entire scene disappointing here, after all this buildup. I'm not expecting the Kama Sutra here, nor am I expecting a crazy ass ML. I even prefer safe, sane, consensual vanilla sex. BUT!!!
I don't have a lot of complaints from the ML here, but I'm still disappointed. I like the plot, I like the characters, I like the progression. I can't even put into words what irritated me here.