wha...?

Iryz February 7, 2025 2:59 pm

What the fuck kinda plot is this??? XD omg... the guy (now I know it's the brother)takes the phone, tells the other person (Kotani) he's taking this person to the nearest hotel, to meet them there, hung up, next scene THEY ARE in the hotel??? No one called back? And everyone went to the hotel just like that???
Sorry if I'm missing something but the moment I saw there was AGAIN a third person meddling, as if people didn't know how to make the story interesting unless there's someone harassing the bottom, I startes to just skip through the chaptera.

Responses
    Ami February 7, 2025 3:18 pm

    I assume (and if you skipped you might have missed this) that he just knew not to bother calling back because the person on the phone was his brother. So he knew his shitty personality and knew he had to go to the hotel straight away.

    Liovrega February 7, 2025 3:30 pm

    Ikr he could’ve just go and pick up a taxi but he still went to the hotel with him
    Forced drama tbh

    Iryz February 7, 2025 5:55 pm
    I assume (and if you skipped you might have missed this) that he just knew not to bother calling back because the person on the phone was his brother. So he knew his shitty personality and knew he had to go to ... Ami

    Yeee never go with "assuming", this word is the worst you can do when defending a story. Assuming, everyone can do that but the story should be able to defend itself, there has to be facts, truths to sustain, any debate is lost the moment you say "I assume".
    And I knew it was the brother, I just said it, it's just awful plot, and it's extremely illogical. Not buying it XD

    Iryz February 7, 2025 5:56 pm
    Ikr he could’ve just go and pick up a taxi but he still went to the hotel with himForced drama tbh Liovrega

    SUPER FORCED DRAMA hahahaha omg, I loved this story, and I feel the "don't want to marry" "my brother is harassing my boyfriend out of all the people in the world" plot is lousy writing.

    Ami February 8, 2025 10:38 pm
    Yeee never go with "assuming", this word is the worst you can do when defending a story. Assuming, everyone can do that but the story should be able to defend itself, there has to be facts, truths to sustain, ... Iryz

    If you aren't assuming things in a story you read and having your own interpretations of a story, are you really reading a story? Creative works are meant to be interpreted and enjoyed in different ways. Sure this is a little pretentious to say about a gay porn comic but point is, everyone's entitled to their own assumptions about stories. I'm not trying to argue truth, that's why I used that word.

    So, how's this "debate" I was so *clearly* invested *deeply* in (sarcasm) holding up?

    Ami February 8, 2025 10:40 pm
    If you aren't assuming things in a story you read and having your own interpretations of a story, are you really reading a story? Creative works are meant to be interpreted and enjoyed in different ways. Sure t... Ami

    To be extra clear I think the story is a little contrived anyways, I was just adding a comment to express another point of view. These added ones are because your reply and better than me attitude sucks (▰˘◡˘▰)