the story is ok but has no depth whatsoever, the beggining didn't had much reasoning because the alpha's "mom" just kill himself and he's just "lol idgas"?? also the author just seems to dislike drawing clothes..? The company that the omega owns has no meaning and how he got it too. The past of the alpha was so-so, it feels like he only exists to fuck the omega idk, the way also that the omega was portrayed like he should be strong but as someone who suffered so much how could he show weakness to the alpha 2 chaps in? Also, if the omega suffered and couldn't do without the alpha's pheromones int eh story for the pregnancy just because he's an alpha, how could the "mother's" alpha do without the pheromones of that asshole since he's so exotic and top 0,0001% alpha in the world? lol If you just want a story for the weird anatomy, sex and cute baby then read this but if you want a good story then search further XP
the story is ok but has no depth whatsoever, the beggining didn't had much reasoning because the alpha's "mom" just kill himself and he's just "lol idgas"?? also the author just seems to dislike drawing clothes..? The company that the omega owns has no meaning and how he got it too. The past of the alpha was so-so, it feels like he only exists to fuck the omega idk, the way also that the omega was portrayed like he should be strong but as someone who suffered so much how could he show weakness to the alpha 2 chaps in? Also, if the omega suffered and couldn't do without the alpha's pheromones int eh story for the pregnancy just because he's an alpha, how could the "mother's" alpha do without the pheromones of that asshole since he's so exotic and top 0,0001% alpha in the world? lol If you just want a story for the weird anatomy, sex and cute baby then read this but if you want a good story then search further XP