Lowkey while I appreciate the new plot I feel like the author made this erotica first and then did a switch up and start throwing plot at us, so the back part doesn’t flow very well….. There’s revelations in the story that feel like we should go “whoa!! so that’s why” But it’s not even possible for us to even react that way because the plot is too much and too complex at one go. It’d be nicer if they actually put more details into season 1
Actually when I read it again, it was so full of little panels and scenes that perfectly sum up to what happens later in the story. It just was so subtle that it's hard to catch if it isn't reread
Lowkey while I appreciate the new plot I feel like the author made this erotica first and then did a switch up and start throwing plot at us, so the back part doesn’t flow very well….. There’s revelations in the story that feel like we should go “whoa!! so that’s why” But it’s not even possible for us to even react that way because the plot is too much and too complex at one go. It’d be nicer if they actually put more details into season 1