Yeah because some of us finally reread from the beginning! Mind you that when a new volume starts for stories, many will go back and reread the whole thing. Many of us did notice the weird stuff the first time around cause some of us might've been a bit younger and now we've grown enough to make critique.
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Yeah, there are going to be things in fiction stories we dont like or feel that can be better, but we never know what goes on behind the scenes.
I understand why you and others would critique it, and that is your right to an opinion, however, I can understand why people are irritated with it cause this issue was brought up in the beginning. Maybe the author wrote the age gap to mirror couple they know, I do the same. We don't have to like certain parts but authors might have reasons why decide this way, I rather let them do it instead of stifling their creativity (me thinking as a writer). And it not like we can ask them since we're on an illegal site, and can't speak Japanese. I do know some mangaka do answer questions from international fans.
Honestly, their age gap is not that big, 17 to 21. I've seen the worst, especially when reading Chinese light novels. The age gap trope has always been popular. I mean look at Twilight, Inuyasha, and the like.
It's true that the "morality" of the story comes down to the author. I'm also a writer and I do agree with said points but the age gap isn't my only issue with the first volume and I mostly complain about it because, I have an ability to just as much as others have an ability to praise the work. I also have issues with how the second child is conceived, and have reasons behind why I have these complaints, whether or not they're fiction, I'm going to speak my mind.
I'm not comparing this to other works, I'm seeing it as it's own story and making critiques about it on it's own. And with those others examples in mind, I also have my own gripes about them but they're unrelated here. I'm not trying to stifle creativity, that's not what critique is about afterall. Critique is about talking about errors made and working around those errors to continue making something good. This story is far along and will not be changed to fit the reader's view of how the story should've started and that's perfectly fine, it doesn't have to. These critiques can simply be just that, a critique, which is evaluation of something from someone's perspective, and give a counter to the positive perspective of some readers. Not everyone has to enjoy something the same way and even then, not everyone has to just be silent when they love something but have complaints about small parts of it.
Agreed, you have the right to speak your mind and they also have the right to speak their mind. At the end of the day it is just our own opinion.
Yo why r the comments having the biggest switch up of the century LMAO chat were volume 7 where they’ve been a couple for like 5 years now and we’re NOW complaining about age gap?—