I see a lot of ppl don’t really get the story but I kinda like the writing of the story. A lot of the lines hit me as poetic in a sweet way and the pacing was nice and slow (I like it slow) so this story was a good read for me. I also liked how Gisela set up an ultimatum for the MC and I expected him to cave and confess but he chose not to out of fear. I thought that fear was portrayed well. The yearning and restraint of the MC was emphasized super well too, as he almost never steps out of line. Finally I thought the setting of pilot and how they are constantly on the move was really interesting, I don’t see it a lot.
My main issue is with the chemistry. The chemistry between the two is honestly lacking, the ML never really has a reason to like the MC at all. And then the red haired guy, he was so chill and MC shot him down so aggro for no reason.
I see a lot of ppl don’t really get the story but I kinda like the writing of the story. A lot of the lines hit me as poetic in a sweet way and the pacing was nice and slow (I like it slow) so this story was a good read for me. I also liked how Gisela set up an ultimatum for the MC and I expected him to cave and confess but he chose not to out of fear. I thought that fear was portrayed well. The yearning and restraint of the MC was emphasized super well too, as he almost never steps out of line. Finally I thought the setting of pilot and how they are constantly on the move was really interesting, I don’t see it a lot.
My main issue is with the chemistry. The chemistry between the two is honestly lacking, the ML never really has a reason to like the MC at all. And then the red haired guy, he was so chill and MC shot him down so aggro for no reason.