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agree.. was so excited but the chapter just feels rushed, dialogue was mid and theres like no immersive thoughts/inner dialouge to make us really engaged
Ikr. U described the situation accurately
I'm so disappointed with this chapter. It was empty and cold and chaotic ...etc. i didn't feel any emotion and everything was blurry
The blur was too much. If u r forbidden of drawing sex scenes just don't draw them light saber was better than the blur. It ruined the art too much blur for both their bodies. The author were so focused on the blur to the point where he forget to make his beautiful touch that makes the reader feel the love, the heat, the emotions just by looking. Dialogue was meh too. The only good thing in this chapter was the hand grab that's it. An emotionless chapter. Nothing was satisfying about it i hope author nim can go back to the tract next chapter. He literally made the ex husband and yuri's intimate time more worthy.