Mmmmh

MaviSupernova February 2, 2025 10:51 am

The story us moving so fast it kinda off putting like the brother for example goes from

Meeting -> suspicion -> getting worn down by her cuteness -> using his power it goes rampage -> she calms it down -> realising his mistake -> rationalising his own complicated feelings -> accepting her as his sister and they hug and make up

All in chapters 10 - 15
5 chapters
other stories take like a whole season to build interpersonal relationships between the characters but here it reminds me how i played doll and between my ken doll and braz doll meeting for the first time and wedding & first kid not even 10 minutes went by

From zero to 100 real fast

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Responses
    Hooble February 2, 2025 7:28 pm

    I kinda get that but I also like this better than the ones where the distrust lasts too long to where they're mean to the MC and then that meanness just gets forgiven super easily.
    Plus it was like the brother was convincing himself he needed to be suspicious rather than actually being suspicious hahaha which makes sense why he was so easily convinced

    Lix Liz February 4, 2025 6:06 am
    I kinda get that but I also like this better than the ones where the distrust lasts too long to where they're mean to the MC and then that meanness just gets forgiven super easily.Plus it was like the brother w... Hooble

    YESSS. I was also relieved!! Also with the fact that she’s gaining confidence in the trust and love her family have for her easily. Other manwhas take ages till they accept the fact that they’re actually loved. Its overused and boring so everything happening quickly is refreshing

    Okami_Senpai February 5, 2025 11:20 pm

    Idk I enjoyed that it got cleared up fast. Now I can spend my time enjoying the simplicity and cuteness of the story without worrying about how they don’t trust her or wtv