The art was so fire (≧∀≦) I agree with the overwhelming story critiques, but wasn't the female lead kinda fire? I think hating her was the point of her character. Her entire arc is that she has no reason to do what she did, she was blinded by her unrealistic desire for love, which is why her character seems so poorly written.
But totally agree that the stories w/ the youtuber was unnecessary. Loved the idea she truly liked him, but the rich guy? Didn't really get the plot there.... I think the author tried to go too heavy in the lore for a short story.
The art was so fire (≧∀≦)
I agree with the overwhelming story critiques, but wasn't the female lead kinda fire? I think hating her was the point of her character. Her entire arc is that she has no reason to do what she did, she was blinded by her unrealistic desire for love, which is why her character seems so poorly written.
But totally agree that the stories w/ the youtuber was unnecessary. Loved the idea she truly liked him, but the rich guy? Didn't really get the plot there.... I think the author tried to go too heavy in the lore for a short story.