huh??
"Huh??" What?
just curious cause you didn't state your point at all,, like idk i expected reasons for the opinion that the writing is bad or something
Oh, sure, here are some of my old comments, where I covered pretty much all my problems.
"Exactly and they don't do anything but fuck, which like is fine for me, as a reader who came ti read yaoi, but I can't see their relationship to be more than just about sexual pleasure.
They don't have common interest, their personalities and social classes are too different (theoretically it can work, we haven't seen it tho) and what do they even like about each other? Ipsae still seems liking Haneum's dick first and now that Haneum likes him, which is such a weak reason." "Ain't no way they stayed together, just bc. I was ready for the melodrama, like wtf, they have so much issues to overcome and how is Ipsae so comically jealous, kinda hypocritical you slut. No like that's just plain stupid."
Let me know if you need more explanation.
oh i see your point. kinda agree on the "not having common interests part", i feel like their relationship building was kinda weak on that cause they're only linking bcs of physical attraction. honestly i enjoyed reading this cause it reminded me of my partner and i but we actually have a lot in common and were friends for years before dating so i get what you're saying
I'm happy, you understand my criticism. I enjoyed it too, for just smut, hentai no-brain it's okay, but there are so many things that can be done better
This reminds me the autor of ,,bad thinking diaries" ,,Lily of the valley" plus ,,I adore you, teacher".
They have gorgeous artstyle (literally simp material), interesting ideas and are able to sell it, but what they lack are writing skills.