To my personal taste, I didn't like how the author put together the plot, the character of...

shirin February 1, 2025 9:56 pm

To my personal taste, I didn't like how the author put together the plot, the character of Seme seemed too immature, the uke shouldn't have accepted so easily.... I feel like she didn't know how to build an interesting story. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

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    RomanArwen February 2, 2025 7:59 am

    I feel like there should have been more. I couldn't just accept that everything just resolved that easily. I mean, the uke might've suffered so much from hiding his true feelings and I can deffo understand that. The seme just seem to have a plot armor that everything will just work out in his favor. I wish there was more chasing for the climax. I wasn't satisfied at all with the whole story. At least, this is just my opinion.