This honestly feels like a first project for the author/artist, or both author and artist ...

max2payne0 January 31, 2025 10:24 pm

This honestly feels like a first project for the author/artist, or both author and artist if they're different people. The art seems to change in between panels (the ML alone has like 3-4 different styles within the same chapter every time and I'm only on chapter 3) and honestly reminds me of chinese manhuas (some awkward body proportions and chibi styles.)The story is repetitive with dragged out dialogue, too, so it's really tiring to read even though I haven't gotten far yet.

The premise is interesting but the execution is so bad it looks more like a parody than an actual story.

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