i think the pacing is fine, not everything needs to be a 100 chapter slow burn.
True, but this one felt out of place for me
the narrative here is working though and navigating a first/new type of relationship rather than the whole story being a build up to starting one.
often when you have teenagers or coming of age type stories, the latter type of narrative would apply better.
Yess, 100%!
i mean its not like theyre new to relationships in the traditional way, mc is new to relationships with men specifically, but he has probably dated before, and he's been married and divorced. ml says he's new to relationships with someone he actually loves, but he's been through multiple hookups, so i wouldn't really be surprised if either of them were quick in establishing a relationship
no I get what you mean, it really did give off slow burn vibes with the first couple of chapters but then after the chapter with yeoreum jerking off to mr lim?? it was quite obvious
Highly agree. Super fast paced :( I’m not a smut hater at all, I love how they did it: but I did think it was super fast & like I didn’t earn it lol
tbf I didn’t dislike the jerking off part, but the sex & relationship part happened wayyyy too fast
yeahhh , like so many others start having sex on like the 2nd chapter but it could’ve been slower with this plot
ngl i didn't think this comment will be this controversial xd
Does anybody know how many chapters is this planned to be?
Because if it's 20-25 chapters max it's okayish, but I kinda feel the author was really horny and rushed the plot to have them fuck, we could have used some more build up.
Old guy has never been with another guy and never really considered young guy's approach as romantic. Such a shame because the art is really soothing and chill, but the plot build up just misses so far. It was so cute at the beginning!!