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You're misunderstanding the virginity bit. The reason he didn't take Ai's virginity during their first tryst is precisely because he knew Ai was inexperienced. Ai was the one who insisted on him taking it and he was happy that Ai gave it to him.
It's a very cute story, but it kind of rubbs me in the wrong way?
1. Calling him a "Daddy": Yes, it's just a word for older guys who can take care of you, but I don't want that connection in my head.
2. The ML being a lot in his cafe without knowing if he is actually bothering him. He is an old man who gave a guy half his age (or at least ten years younger) his number. Guy doesn't contact him. Old man shows up in cafe. Offers him anal orgasms.
A little bit more shame or self consciousness would have been nicer to read.
If someone that age can't pull someone his own age, run, because he is just using the innocence and inexperience of a young person. And if he doesn't pull away, when he notices "Oh, that guy doesn't want me", even worse. Don't be creepy, mister.
3. The ML saying he likes boyish looking guys and his butt is so smooth (basically like a child).
4. The obsession with the virginity. "I took your virginity". And the following "I come to like that" - MISTER, WHAT? I don't know why, but I hate that sentence so much. Especially between such an old man and basically a boy just out of high school.
5. He was totally not hesitant to do it with a man a lot younger than him. And if that's the case they don't want you ALTHOUGH you are young, but BECAUSE you are so young.
There was this office story where ML and MC also had a big age gap but I liked how the ML was hesitant about it. The story was slower and well thought through.
The whole taking-a-young-boys-virginity just seems like a fetish and I guess that's what rubbs me the wrong way? Because it was a fine story, not rapey and you could actually take it a little serious (not like with a lot of other stories which have similar red flags but obviously cant't be taken serious because it's just porn). But the whole fetish gave this cute story a little "predatory" vibe.