I honestly think the author should’ve ended the main story right after the punishment/resolution with lize, and then could’ve made these past recent chapters as side stories. It would make much better sense with that set up. Because rn, it feels like filler because the original novel ending wasn’t finished right away and still had a bit more involving lize- but since they ended lize’s part much sooner, the author I guess is creating filler chapters to reach that chapter count? This rn feels like it’s side stories supposed to be after the ending, which usually happens in other manhwas where the villain is defeated and the mc is just enjoying her life and maybe add some small issues in their daily lives. - - - Not that important but something I noticed involving the art/feel:
Also idk if it’s just me but is the way Edith is portrayed different? I can’t tell if it’s intentional because of everything that happened in the story, or if the author is just unintentionally making her seem more dainty(?) Like before she had a personality that had several emotions and the expressions on her face would change a lot along with being funny at times. Now I feel like the art is making it seem like Edith looks more like an expressionless heroine in other stories that are dainty and a damsel in distress. In the recent chapter, I’d expect Edith to have an expression with her brows furrowed more and be like “wth is this chick doing??” Look like she used to. But her expression comes off as more like “oh no! Why has she done this?” Like those two-faced heroines during an annulment event where the villainess gets accused, while the heroine clings to the man and acts pitiful. I miss the strong stance/expression she used to have.
It’s not just how Edith is portrayed now but Ngl I feel as if the art is lacking in the recent chapters (you can tell very clearly when it comes to killian). I think the best art was in the middle part, which had the most color and details. It doesn’t look like the artist changed nor does it feel like the artist is experimenting with their style. It feels more like they went for a simpler style and may have gotten a bit tired? Makes me wonder if they just want to finish up too lmao. Maybe I’m just assuming cause that’s how I feel after doing a comic, I start out doing my best and being enthusiastic but if i make the story go on for too long, I get bored and become more unmotivated as I reach the ending, and that reflects in my art as well, making me more lazy and the art turns worse/simpler and rushed. It feels like looking at the art now, the artist lost that passion. I could just be wrong though lol
I honestly think the author should’ve ended the main story right after the punishment/resolution with lize, and then could’ve made these past recent chapters as side stories. It would make much better sense with that set up. Because rn, it feels like filler because the original novel ending wasn’t finished right away and still had a bit more involving lize- but since they ended lize’s part much sooner, the author I guess is creating filler chapters to reach that chapter count? This rn feels like it’s side stories supposed to be after the ending, which usually happens in other manhwas where the villain is defeated and the mc is just enjoying her life and maybe add some small issues in their daily lives.
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Not that important but something I noticed involving the art/feel:
Also idk if it’s just me but is the way Edith is portrayed different? I can’t tell if it’s intentional because of everything that happened in the story, or if the author is just unintentionally making her seem more dainty(?) Like before she had a personality that had several emotions and the expressions on her face would change a lot along with being funny at times. Now I feel like the art is making it seem like Edith looks more like an expressionless heroine in other stories that are dainty and a damsel in distress. In the recent chapter, I’d expect Edith to have an expression with her brows furrowed more and be like “wth is this chick doing??” Look like she used to. But her expression comes off as more like “oh no! Why has she done this?” Like those two-faced heroines during an annulment event where the villainess gets accused, while the heroine clings to the man and acts pitiful. I miss the strong stance/expression she used to have.
It’s not just how Edith is portrayed now but Ngl I feel as if the art is lacking in the recent chapters (you can tell very clearly when it comes to killian). I think the best art was in the middle part, which had the most color and details. It doesn’t look like the artist changed nor does it feel like the artist is experimenting with their style. It feels more like they went for a simpler style and may have gotten a bit tired? Makes me wonder if they just want to finish up too lmao. Maybe I’m just assuming cause that’s how I feel after doing a comic, I start out doing my best and being enthusiastic but if i make the story go on for too long, I get bored and become more unmotivated as I reach the ending, and that reflects in my art as well, making me more lazy and the art turns worse/simpler and rushed. It feels like looking at the art now, the artist lost that passion. I could just be wrong though lol