No no no

PewPewPewPewPewPew January 28, 2025 8:14 pm

You know what? I see the vision—the creativity that this story want to execute well... But as u can see, they're having a hard time doing that—the pacing isn't the smoothest, it's a bit rough as if instead of revising they accidentally present us the outline and the draft only... You guys get me?

It was fun and entertaining at first, but then suddenly the pacing got ruined. As the story unfolds, too much is happening all at once to the point that we can't focused on ANY of the problem at all.

I hope sooner or later they'll be able to pick up the right pacing again and we'll have a smooth transition and highlights for every arc.

P.s. i really like the silver hair dude, if this is gonna have romance genre then I'm rooting for him as the ml (tho they're still too young so I HOPE THEY WON'T FOCUS ON ROMANCE YET)

Responses
    TwistedCupid January 28, 2025 11:57 pm

    Also, it’s just seems to come out of nowhere. It’s just one out of conversation and she decides to go pharaoh like this yet she was willing to deal with so much as either an orphan or when she was attacked or whatever or when that made betrayed her I don’t care. I just I just thought that we would see like cool transformations of dragons and action and just more stories regarding like you know, romance, instead of this conundrum, we just keeps repeatedly padding her on the back and saying they’re there. You’re such a perfect, awesome angel, even though her personality is so so. I am so freaking tired of the story giving me a hard time to even wake up. Also, what happened to the girl that was a brunette or something? We hardly ever seen her.

    Darkhikari February 2, 2025 11:55 pm
    Also, it’s just seems to come out of nowhere. It’s just one out of conversation and she decides to go pharaoh like this yet she was willing to deal with so much as either an orphan or when she was attacked ... TwistedCupid

    No romance things won't be the most important things there too much problems who'll come before that....