Fast pace not enough explaining

Mooncactus January 28, 2025 9:21 am

It’s a cute series but I would have liked if she learned her ability in a different way like a close to death experience it would’ve made more sense but let’s see how this plays out !

Responses
    Hffvhjh January 28, 2025 10:12 am

    She literally died

    boohoo January 28, 2025 10:44 am
    She literally died Hffvhjh

    right that's what i was thinking, she actually died out in the snow and the goddess turned back time while also revealing her powers

    Rishi January 28, 2025 2:32 pm

    "close to death" dear stranger on the internet she literally died

    Mooncactus January 29, 2025 5:56 am
    right that's what i was thinking, she actually died out in the snow and the goddess turned back time while also revealing her powers boohoo

    Chill out I’m just saying the writing could’ve been better obviously she “died” but automatically learning how to use it wasn’t good writing at all I wished she learned little by little and not right away

    Mooncactus January 29, 2025 5:57 am
    "close to death" dear stranger on the internet she literally died Rishi

    Dear stranger I’m well aware of that, I also read it but it’s not good writing learning how to transition a phase to another smoothly would’ve been great all I’m saying her learning how to use it right away wasn’t it for me personally we’re all entitled to our own opinions.

    Mooncactus January 29, 2025 5:58 am
    She literally died Hffvhjh

    That doesn’t give us a good reason how she was able to pick up her ability right away it’s not good writing maybe the novel was better but I personally never read it , it’s just my own personal opinion is all

    Hffvhjh January 29, 2025 2:41 pm
    That doesn’t give us a good reason how she was able to pick up her ability right away it’s not good writing maybe the novel was better but I personally never read it , it’s just my own personal opinion is... Mooncactus

    They literally said children should have been able to manifest by the age of one then proceed to explain that actually using the power is easy?? She wasn't immediately op either?? They also clearly showed that the goddess guided her in the one time she used her ability lmao y'all are actually slow